Leaf Engraving

Leaf Engraving
Leaf Engraving
is this poem pretty decent?

no debates please. i'm not here to argue.

The Devil's Campaign:

His deception like a campaign
Filled with empty promises
A promise of a better future
And more prosperity

Sex, fame, wealth, and gain
Satan trapping men in his game

Putting trust in the lord
Makes his lies fall apart
Satan has no chance
When Jesus does his part

Men will never learn
This is my concern
They long to be saved
But earthly attachment leaves them craved
The devil's lies engraved
The unsuspecting man
Eternally enslaved
thanks, chri. i feel like i need to add another verse either between the 2nd and 3rd or 3rd and 4th breaks.
any suggestions?

I really like it, and i think it's true, too :)



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